Keep Going, Evergreen Is Nowhere

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I couldn’t continue. I tried to lay down, but I couldn’t bend my legs.

I thought about leaning against a tree, but none were in sight. In denial, I scanned the land in search of some way to shield myself from the cruel beating that the world was currently giving me, but to no use. I plodded forward on the path that wasn’t actually there. But something was pulling me one way more than the other. Was it because I had packed my backpack unevenly, or was it because I was about to find my purpose?

This entire journey was followed through because it would give me a chance to define myself and to see who I really was.

I followed the magnetic route with high hopes that it would end this suffering, and I would be capable of fulfilling my desires. As if out of nowhere, a 10 meter long, one-foot-high wall, made of the white powder that was sprinkling everywhere, stood in front of a lonely, snow-patched pine tree and blocked my path, almost like it was trying to guard it. I had no idea what it was and barely paid attention to it as I carefully stepped over the barrier and suddenly blanked out.

I don’t know if I slipped on a patch of ice and hit my head or if my winded body had enough. All I can tell you is that now, my backpack has disappeared, the very wall that stood in my way just a few minutes ago was now around me and I couldn’t move at all. Most eerily, though, the evergreen was nowhere to be found.

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Shashi Dahal
Shashi Dahal
3 years ago

Good imagination! Keep writing!

Shreyans Rizal
Shreyans Rizal
3 years ago
Reply to  Shashi Dahal

Thank you

Shreyans Rizal
Shreyans Rizal
3 years ago
Reply to  Shashi Dahal

Thank you very much!

Deepak Pokhaarel
Deepak Pokhaarel
3 years ago

Great Job Shreyans, Keep writing.

Rup Rizal
Rup Rizal
3 years ago

Nice writing, Shreyans

Lorwnc
Lorwnc
3 years ago

Great writing skills Shreyans!
Please continue to write 😊

Purushottam sigdel
Purushottam sigdel
3 years ago

Great
and all the best

Naveen
Naveen
3 years ago

A very good one, Champ!! Happy writing.

poinapple
3 years ago

good writing!!! great job!! :))

Cameron mackenzie
Cameron mackenzie
3 years ago

Nice

Cameron MacKenzie
Cameron MacKenzie
3 years ago
Reply to  Shreyans Rizal

np

Gleem blapson
Gleem blapson
3 years ago

Wow! I like your writing style. Keep up the good work, keep writing!

yhh
yhh
3 years ago

Very good!

Last edited 3 years ago by yhh
maple leaves
maple leaves
3 years ago

I could imagine the scene, very well and detailed. great work!

pineapple fruity
pineapple fruity
3 years ago

Good job on this! I appreciate your work!

black lives matter
black lives matter
3 years ago

good job

flamping roads
flamping roads
3 years ago

good work!

joeeyyy
joeeyyy
3 years ago

Some good writing you got there ^^

Ding a ding a ding
Ding a ding a ding
3 years ago

This story is the best!

Logan Case
Logan Case
3 years ago

Very good job, keep up the good word Shreyans!!!

Logan Case
Logan Case
3 years ago
Reply to  Shreyans Rizal

I mean work just so you know.

wsg
wsg
3 years ago

I love it!

Bhagi
Bhagi
3 years ago

Great writing Shreyans! Keep up the good work

Kul
Kul
3 years ago

Good job, Shreyans. Don’t let any wall stop or slow you down. Knock it down and keep marching.

Massimo
Massimo
3 years ago

Great Writing Shreyans! I love your perspectives.